comment's on short story's

Leah's-The line "Giselle raises her hand with excitment and a tiffany's braclet hanging from her wrist" because you describe how she's "cool" because she has expensive name brand things. It's also "Cool" how your character is considered "cool" because she is from a new york. 

Suoinorra's- It was nice how you made the character come from a different state and how they had the challenge of fitting in with new clothes and new people. Your dialogue wasn't as interesting as it could have been but it was nice how you had every character say something.

Matt's- I thought it was really creative how you used Jonathan the cool person but then turn the story around so that Charlie was the main character and the definition of "cool". Your last sentence "For Charlie. being an individual with a voice, was cool." really tied the whole story up and made an impact on me, and changed my opinion about being what it really means to be "cool".

Yurelis-

Wassup Yurelis I thought your story was good and creative. It was very similar to how teenagers really act and how many kids only want to be your friend based of the things you have. I thought your whole idea of being a genuine friend and thats what makes you cool was a great interpertation of the word "cool"

Jess's- I thought your story was cool and showed the smart side of being cool.