Monday, January 11, 2010

cool outline

As teenagers or even 5 year old kids we are always trying to over play our peers to be seen as better then them or "cooler". The key question is when does this all stop? The majority of teenagers try to make themselves look cool by following the newest trend, but how long will it take before people realize... each trend ends. 

Intro: example the key things that are done in this day in age in order to be seen as "cool" and how most teenagers fall into peer presser such as smoking, drinking, getting weird and obnoxious piercings, and even spending extreme amounts of money on clothes or things expressed by the media.

Body paragraphs:
1. peer presser and how a lot of teenagers are more of followers then leaders in relation to drugs 

2. how we are influenced by the media and spend tons of money on unnecessary name brand items just in order to be considered "cool" 

3. The significance of tattoos and piercings and how if a teenager is seen with one they are considered a rebel or "cool"

conclusion: restate my thesis and conclude everything and end off with a suspenseful last sentence. 

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